The audience feedback I have received from the rough cut of my music video has enabled me to take into account changes which need to be made- proposed by my target audience of the genre. The audience which I used to collate this feedback are those within the demographic of the Indie/Rock genre- specifically in relation to my choice of song. Therefore the audience have an existing cultural capital so their opinion benefits the realism of my video in regards to improvements which need to be made.
One of the comments which a member of our audience gave is that he spotted some of the college locations we used to film, due to the easy access, and thought that this was not conventional of the genre. Therefore myself and my group will re-film these scenes in different locations which are stereotypical of the Indie/Rock genre, i.e. outdoor locations.
Another comment which was made was that the ending of the video was rather dark. However myself and my group decided that the idea of suicide was merely suggested and was not shown explicitly, therefore instead of re-filming this, we decided to leave it in, and increase our target audience age-range to 16-25.
Our target audience also commented on a lack of close ups of the artist and lip syncing, which we agreed with as these are typically common conventions of music videos, therefore needed to be explored in more detail. Therefore we will add some more shots in throughout the rest of filming time, and throughout the development of editing.
Overall, I feel that these comments have helped us to gain a sense of the conventions we need to include to create a realistic looking Indie/ Rock music video.